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Tuesday, October 01, 2013

AHaikuADay: Serene

Darkness creeping,
Heavy breathing,
His warmth again,
Serene breathing
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Walking hand in hand,
Along the beach,
Serene look on the couple's face seen!
 
 
This Haiku is written for A Haiku A Day. Prompt: Serene

4 comments:

  1. Beautiful sense of quiet intimacy in your haiku.

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    1. Thanks very much Gemma for such a beautiful comment! :)

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  2. Sweet and blooming with love. Well-written.

    -HA (Admin of A Haiku A Day)

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    1. Thanks a lot Anmol, If I have mentioned the right name here! :)

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