Saturday, October 05, 2013

AHaikuADay: Straw Mat

Children playing picnic,
Tents built,
Straw mats lying,
total comfort.

Straw mat, 
the only remains from the floods,
The old lady hugging it close.

This Haiku is written for A Haiku A Day. Prompt: Straw mat


  1. good haiku.
    the second one is very touching. there's a very big difference in the imagery between the two. one is for play, the other is for survival.
    thumbs up!

  2. The emotions are so well portrayed in these haiku. Well done.

    -HA (Admin of A Haiku A Day)


Thanks for visiting my blog! Appreciate your comments!! :)

Visit to discover Indian blogs